nocapparati

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15 Jul 2021

I told em when I left that I would be back, Forever wiidzy ya boy done had a relapse, The flow easy one take is all I need now, Watch me put these haters down like I done broke they're kneecaps, They said I was different i would beg to differ but I, Can see the signs n see what they said bout the look in my eyes, I showed the world what up way more then just a cou-ple of times, Some still surprised how I make it in the trenches at 9, A fight to survive, thats what I call it the burden and crosses I carry is enough to bury all of my worries bt if I was that type, To just give up when I'm hurting I dont deserve the opportunity to really put work in, most dont know how it feels, to have a mom as a dope boy, to living in the streets where you shot at by no boys, sink or swims the mentality you knock n hear no noise, we gain a casualty for everyday we ain't hot boy,

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

3 years ago

Hi @harleychristensen.3081! Welcome to our feedback of 'nocapparati'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Seriously fire delivery, it suits the beat perfectly, that's dope. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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