LIFE IS A MESS!
LIL LISTY12 Plays
•15 Jul 2021
You know me life is hard, what can u do with 100 scars, I dont know but its hard, everyone look, and stairs, and I thinking its unfair but who knows, life is hard hope i make it, feeling like im living stuck in the basement, i cant wait, im exosted, scraped my knees off the pavement, hurt so bad, im impatient, cant stop thinking about my payment, bank is on me , i cant make it, its a risk but ill take it, ya, through this God will help me hill push me right passed the crime, no more time for dieing, its a challenge but ill make it no more threats no one regrets it , still goes on the push right passed it they don't care im no forchune, step up on the corner , see those people upset about it help one out you'll like it , take a risk, uh don't dought it, you got this life, ya don't get upset about it, be yourself, if your true about it, dont look back, its not worth it, take good path ya you got it , left turn not right cause thats your hearts decision, listen to that not what your friends think about it
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You know me life is hard, what can u do with 100 scars, I dont know but its hard, everyone look, and stairs, and I thinking its unfair but who knows, life is hard hope i make it, feeling like im living stuck in the basement, i cant wait, im exosted, scraped my knees off the pavement, hurt so bad, im impatient, cant stop thinking about my payment, bank is on me , i cant make it, its a risk but ill take it, ya, through this God will help me hill push me right passed the crime, no more time for dieing, its a challenge but ill make it no more threats no one regrets it , still goes on the push right passed it they don't care im no forchune, step up on the corner , see those people upset about it help one out you'll like it , take a risk, uh don't dought it, you got this life, ya don't get upset about it, be yourself, if your true about it, dont look back, its not worth it, take good path ya you got it , left turn not right cause thats your hearts decision, listen to that not what your friends think about it
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