D̷͆eeꓘay

3 years ago

nice

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @bunnykill! Waddup - let's take a look at 'times up! '! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Shootergang Kony

3 years ago

Ay ay ay man its time to change its time cuz you be walking around the town acting cool but you know your time is up its time you need to go cuz your times up