Fake Friends
I remember the times when you would say you was kin to me, the times you had my back an preached upon the family but then began to be the one to wanna damage thee, thinking life was different an how we could re write history but its you that did this to me the one to provoke thy enemy but I promise u keep rattling this cage when it pops the tart will be bitter sweet looking for the flaws so you take peek really need to take a seat, if u pay close attention the lesson would make sense to thee but instead always trying to compete thinking that you gone teach making a climb only you can reach, but how can you be a teacher when you still a student in these streets im just tryin to eat wake up an just brush my teeth but now I got the thoughts of a sinning man rushing to my feet you done took me off the leash you gon know what it mean to Rest In Peace if you didn't get this message I have no problem to repeat in a simple form my next step is just to sit back an breathe
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @chaddesjardin! Welcome to our feedback of 'Fake Friends'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. It's hard to keep rhythm on a acapella and you've done a great job here, well done! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 6/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
@tmbeatz i appreciate it fam good lookin out
@chaddesjardin good job fam 👏
@thebratt i appreciate it. Thank you so much, ima check out your profile now
this is deep ... thank you for sharing... your right music would have taken away from it... good clear voice... I enjoyed this 😊 check mine out sometime ... it different lol
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥