Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @pi0xtmstoj! Welcome to our feedback of '43rd'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Good choice of beat! Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Kavion Johnson

3 years ago

Watch me fuckin your girl in your bed then she sarterd to give me head then we went to the back I made that shit shounded like a rap next I turned into a baby goat i made that shit fuckin flow then I fuck your hoe then keep talking that shit I’m still fuckin your bitch talk all that shit now boy hold on boy I’m not done with you yet I hit you ass with that chop make you ass fall off then I told you to pick you mans for I will then you will be next then I will have to deal let me get off this bitch man big 43rd block I’m this bitch man