Life Is Hard
Jay Lux113 Plays
•13 Jul 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @therealjaylux! Thanks for sharing 'Life Is Hard' with us! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! The beat is fire, nice choice. Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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