Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jojolopez! Welcome to our feedback of 'lil jojo- lame (official music video)'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your flow is pretty nice, you just fall off beat a few times in the track. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

jojo lopez

3 years ago

when i see you on that block I love you your nice and cute pull up in that rari you love the apple juice you said you love me to I had rhymes to 50 girls pull up in that truck I dont play games that much you said you love me now we broked up I was crying so much pulled up and I wased soaked so much you said sorry and I changed so fame your lame I love you I cant take no lame girl you said bye now we done I got a fame girl you liked me now we are done I cant waste no time on a broke girl