Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @bobbijoraines! Thanks for sharing 'first sucks' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Bobbijo Raines

3 years ago

how do I change the beat

Bobbijo Raines

3 years ago

nobody realy realy knows how much i am hurting on the inside freely i hate myself and i dont feel good enough to treat myself by the wayside, i aint good enough to be taken by the king on the outside,Does anyone ask me how i feel no its not about me its about helping them make it to the free side, i am always helpin others get shelter before the storm bust for them on the outside,I hate thinking about banking them for the morning time let them just take it for the slide on their own side, i tell them the little white lie that i am fine on the inside so they dont have to wait for me indo time.i am my own clown called i know i can.i am my only friend from way back then i was hanging them and weighing them. i hate hurt its sounds like the sound of dirt to be dug up and taken out in the fear of this low down level