Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @williamburnett! Welcome to our feedback of 'Drill (10:53)'! Good choice of beat! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

William Burnett

3 years ago

if you're 'broke', it's because I broke you if you 'choke', it's because I choked you you just clench them fists in rage.. you won't ever throw, dude! so true..- real talk: you said this was a freestyle battle then acted wack.. just like your dreams, your schemes die mangled yo, 'cream'? really? well, if you're that into it let's talk dairy: you probably spend your life baked.. & to top it all off you're a fairy think you're good? nearly. but you need to refine your interests cuz if all you got is 'bishiness', you'll just get rep as a princess see, think: lest we forget.. the King is the top dog he gets respect from subjects who think he's God's law now you can take a crown or 2 by infiltrating the tower, but you'll never take the throne unless you earn the power