Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @thabangonli! Waddup - let's take a look at 'baby'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Dope recording, nicely done. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Thabang Onli

3 years ago

yeah yeah yeah yeah um all alone fuck this thing you call love it doesn't seem to be so real as you say it is baby why did you have to leave me i thought we were meant to be but i guess i was fooling my self all this time all this time all this time all this time baby i thought you were my ride or die that you would never leave me baby um drowning in ma own fucken thoughts um always praying that you will come back with tears in my eyes baby everynight i have an image of yr pretty face um always thinking of you if it was possible for me to take back time i would coz of you baby baby baby baby baby baby