Steven M Hibbs

3 years ago

I wrote the song

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @destroyerman55! Welcome to our feedback of 'Don't lie to me '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Steven M Hibbs

3 years ago

I made this song shortly after my girlfriend left me. she lied a lot and I always caught her in her lies and then she cheated on me and she tried to get me to take her back.