Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @gachawolf! Welcome to our feedback of 'on the run'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is dope and really works for this track. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Gacha Wolf

3 years ago

I'm on the run I dont know what ive done I'm having some fun when I'm beatin someone your on the run you murdered someone your running from tge red and blue ready with that one and two everybody askin me who are you I was a soldier fighting in the war when you angered me I busted fown you door why you gotta be such a stick in the mud everybody knows your just a dud I take my money give it to the poor they told me missions over time to abort so I went home and watched that racecar sport when I turn the corner I beat you on the basketball court you do me a favor when you holdin down the fort you better not block cuz I got that block you say you got us free but I'm the one that got the key you say I'm like real steel im kicking with my heel always taking my bill now I got time to kill watch it with my dino frill now im on the drugs with my thugs trippin you with my rugs me and my bro we cone for that doh I'm rhe one that bought that lamb it about time that we go all im gonna say is no more hidin in the low