Elm st

330 Plays

09 Jul 2021

yeah... here i come better duck for cover when I see yu nigga its a must i up it wont fight with yu no discussion bustin at yu and yo cuzin killing these suckas by tha dozen ima real nigga thts big facts witta all blk 10 mac dnt get wackked leave yo bitch sad with yo bitch ass niggas playing ill make a call ass knocked off with tha baby sawed off clean his ass up and im taking off thought it was sweet how tha fuck it taste now face down on the mufuckin ground don't make a sound or im. taking u out knock yo shit loose see wht u thinking about nigga running tht mouf will get you hurt in the souf don't make flush out gun shots in the crowd he leaking now panicking looking around vision getting. a. lil dimmer now want to yell for help but can't make a sound knew yo ass bound to drown can't be king coward yu a clown and ima hold it down from town to town nigga yu gotta problem we can figure get aired out fuck yu talking bout choppa make a nigga ass walk it out yu can chalk'em out without doubt nigga stop running yo fuckin mouf

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3 years ago

Hey @riccobonner, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Elm st', here are our thoughts 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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