Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @adriannaelliott! Welcome to our feedback of 'make it happen'! The beat is dope and really works for this track, but we can't really hear anything else. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Play around with different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Trey

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.