Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @kaemariboykin! Welcome to our feedback of 'Transformer (17:34)'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Good choice of beat! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Kaemari Boykin

3 years ago

transformers you going to get shot in you head there ain't no dot come back alive see what had happened was he never made it but i did i got to keep grinding till i die this no lie see you dont know me i will shoot you as nice as kobe nobody really knew the real me im a demon with a kind heart but you get on my bad side you gon did this is true slime.see my neck its fly but my hip ready with the guns for someone to die and im about that life lil boy next time you better get that right see i got more drip than your daddy did im not.one of your lil friends go back and do your chores like your mommy said you a goofy from day one i dont play i just aim.straight at yo head bow bow bowwwwww......... grrrddddd