Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @aubreyfortenberry! Welcome to our feedback of 'Yoki (09:07)'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

aubrey fortenberry

3 years ago

you could of listened to me go away dont come crying to me if you dont make it its not a game this is life so leave me alone i would rather be alone then have a jerk like you mess up my life beacuse your not happy with yourself dont put your anger and disappointment on me leave i dont want to see you again