Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @caseygreene.9507! Thanks for sharing 'you can run but you cant hide' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Casey Greene

3 years ago

yeah yeah lets go suffering, smothering, hovering over the bloody mess the carcasses piled high smoltering from unrest you can smell the rotten flesh that the virus the infests burning ticking the life away as the darkness sets in and takes the space the government just lies and lies right in your face and hey its not right but what can you say theyre gonna lie steal murder and cheat taxx your life away you can run but you cant hide everybody has a set moment in time you can run but you cant hide got to face music gotta ride the tide