Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @pohnphylderapper! Welcome to our feedback of ' back in busness'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Pohnphyl

3 years ago

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