Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @JeffNorthern! Welcome to our feedback of 'hard'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jeff Northern

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.