Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @thebigblood! Welcome to our feedback of 'Damage (01:28)'! Dope delivery, there are a few good flows here. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Using less explicit language would be dope as it makes music more accessible. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

thebigblood

3 years ago

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