Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @demarcoporter! Welcome to our feedback of 'hoez and broz'! We like some of the lyrics in here, they're put together real well. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Good choice of beat! Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Demarco porter

3 years ago

yea yea all these hoes can't pay attention like I am offended mf their playing me but I just can't be me, and they're playing me but do they dare play my games of proclaims bro I gotta throw you in the ditch you are my enemy so I am your jealousy