hold on loosely
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β’06 Jul 2021
let my guard down for your love, you broke me just because, now im sitting reminiscing all the lies that you made up, I was blind to all the signs, now im between the lines, im tore apart tonight hope when I wake up ill be fine, but the truth is that im fucked up steady liquor sippin, this house ain't a home if all my family is missing, take another shot yea, drowning in my sorrow, contemplating if I even wanna see tomorrow, ptsd
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Yo @harleychristensen.3081! Waddup - let's take a look at 'hold on loosely'! The rhyming is well put together and we love the hook on this. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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