trying

6 Plays

06 Jul 2021

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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3 years ago

Yo @lionellgillespie! Waddup - let's take a look at 'trying'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Good choice of beat! Dope lyrics, we love what you've done with this. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

I'm on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm never gonna settle, Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on the prize, Meteoric rise, Record breaking highs, Limit is the skies, Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, Aspiration so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my rhyme, You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time

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