Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @onismuskgabo! Welcome to our feedback of 'life is hard'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. This is super chill, a real laid back vibe. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Onismus Kgabo

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.