Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @donlane! Welcome to our feedback of 'ill'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Don Lane

3 years ago

heavy is the head that bare the crown / 2 killers always by my side follow me around / in the sea most of my life /off that x blowin checks fuck a bitch switch positions cheeks clapping claim to love me cause im rapping/always packing nuts draggin spit flames imma dragon /bout that action with the shits, too focused to ever quit/ flip a brick tell rhe feds to suck my dick/ they know im strategic militant minded open never confine it or restrict cut the shit/ number 1 draft pic all state in good hands i sont shake hands send my lil biddy to break ya mans/ he preoccupied too caught up to know you bout to take that ride a fucking homicide/