This is my Life
Dalton Krapfl115 Plays
•04 Jul 2021
Rappers go through depression Tryna find yourself is so stressing They talk about you Cause they jealous Buckle up, social media reckless Don’t care about yo feelings They selfish, They’ll leave you hanging Like a necklace, Gotta swallow yo pride to express this, I'm the mailman I got to address this, It’s the only way you’ll grow Like steph curry you gotta let it go, Can’t hold it in cause it’s gone show You C4, in minutes you’ll blow Like some pumas, Put it all on the track Take the beat, eat it up like a snack Don’t let them derail you, Stay on track Spaulding yeah dog, You’ll bounce back
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @daltonkrapfl.4667! Thanks for sharing 'This is my Life' with us! Fire lyrics, we love what you've done with this and can feel that raw passion. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up so we can hear every element right. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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