Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @ryanjoll! Thanks for sharing 'Transformer (15:43)' with us! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

ryanjoll

3 years ago

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