Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @mr.chow! Welcome to our feedback of 'RIP '! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

mR. cHoW

3 years ago

yeah I'm coming at you live with this track, I'm about to put some rap, about to spit some facts, you know what time it is, I'm about to give all that I have to give. life's about what you make of it and that's just my take on it. and yeah life's not a box of chocolates but I must say I had much more until I lost it. now that being said I got lots in my head lots to say lots to spit can you catch my drip? now don't go throw a fit, just take a second I call again with it, getting jiggy with it, and that's word on my brother Rome, rip big bro for all the things you've done and for all the things you've shown. we lost you way too early and that's not the end of the story you see it's not blurred lines or lll rhymes that would have kept you alive just wish I could have been there for you to revive and get you back on your feet so that I couldn't have to call it defeat. like many others I've lost way too early in this part of my story it kind of gets gory but I'm spitting facts about you big bro and now I'm going to take things to the next level and show who I have to show. you see you were OG and there's no lying in that which is why I'm coming at you spitting this tear wrap right here in my own trap. Rome you were a legend my dude. and im not being rude, all I'm saying is, is that u had mad life left to live.. its really sad that that one we call the Devil tempted you past your point and then you Gave In. and the same goes for you big bro Tyler. you were here one moment and go on the next but you already know the rest you left us way too early and I know this far too early. if you just stayed on your grind like you were on so well I doubt you would have fell and landed me somewhere in between heaven and hell when I could finally tell. but you see that's after everything sunk in and I came to the conclusion and it was the conclusion that it was my big two older brothers that I was the one losing. Rest In Paradise you too. Ill see yall in Heaven when my time comes you see. at least all I can say now is that Jesus was the one who set you free before you perished and left me alone and now I can't even pick up the phone and holler at y'all because what's done is done and you both left me too soon which is why I'm spitting these wraps up in my room just to get through. word to me