Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jerrailwoodsjr! Waddup - let's take a look at 'clementine'! We think there are some nice flows in here, keep it up. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. The beat doesn't suit your bars so well, maybe try them over a different beat? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jerrail Woods Jr

3 years ago

im trying im trying im not doing no more time im tired im tired clementine i have did enough time man im tired talking i just dealt with a stupid hoe im tired clementine trying not to lose my cool my daughter in school and im in the pool eating food had a bad day so don try me fool saw that bitch then i started to drool but im cool im overrulled when say i hit those rhymes like clementine ik im so fine clementine no rhyme bitch a dime that bitch sour like a lime when toxic af but im still in luck bruh im just fuck u dum duck when i saw dat bitch i went yuck im tired im tired im not doing no more time im tired clementine slump god out