Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @hendread! Welcome to our feedback of 'I'm the man'! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

@hendread #tmForDeliverance

Hen Dread

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down