pik it up
Jai Davis9 Plays
•26 Jun 2021
Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.
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Hey @jaidavis! Thanks for sharing 'pik it up' with us! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are real quiet compared to the beat, put 'em way up to get a perfect mix. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Real chill, we love this vibe! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.
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