Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @exoticsandwichgaming! Thanks for sharing 'Lil Jean - In line' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The rhyming is well put together. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Exotic Sandwich Gaming

3 years ago

Ayy, Niggas try to punch the bag (Lil Jeans) Gurl you got that shine, I keep looking at you because you are so in line. Im grinnin because your my Goku and im the Krillin