Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @ashlietaylor.9451! Waddup - let's take a look at 'jaydensmith'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The rhyming is well put together. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ashlie Taylor

3 years ago

everybody white is killing us they shouldn't be doing this but as a king I will make sure I will keep you all safe nobody's nobody else don't surrender make sure that you stay safe make sure that you are fun it's the police pull you over do what they tell you don't get killed and remember keep your kids and their place cuz they're trying to beat up other kids that are being bullied because it happens wrong with them and their head people are dying people are crying people are dying because of different drugs that are new and it's covid is not helping anything it just killing us worser