TUI DANIELS

BROKEN PENCILS AND LETTERS

TUI DANIELS
BROKEN PENCILS AND LETTERS

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25 Jun 2021

Broken pencils and letters Got a lisp you'll regret it Cause I twisted the method When I give out my message Imma hit with the meth heads Imma trip and a menace Brother Skitz and his bandits Throwing hits and they landed Missing bits but I planned it Writing wrote when I writ it My teacher chokes so I hit it Imma bloke don't you get it I'm smoking dope with a fetish For making dope outta letters its dope come and get it Imma buy a gun Fill the bullet with lyrics Then put the bullet in your head BAP Like I'm lingering death I'm spitting lyrical meth You overdosed Now your clinically dead Your toast now How you supposed To lyrically mesh With the lyrical best I spit fire But your litterally deaf The bullet misfired But I hit you with the lyrical meds Got you so high you spiritually left But the drugs won't save you Cause it's all in your head Your wishing That the bullet just grazed you But the lyrics like a bullet It's lodged in your head You'll probably never forget it Hope your getting the message I'm a menace for letters I got a fetish for method I spoke to silence then Woke up Heard the voices getting violent then Spoke up Told the voice imma kill him when I grow up Now I'm grown imma villain and im killing em I'll Tell em You were a big fish In a little pond But I'm the Great White Shark With the big dong I'm the silverback Call me King Kong I'm a killer gnat I drop the illest raps Like an f bomb But your in its wrath im like teflon

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3 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hi @tuidaniels.1610! Welcome to our feedback of 'BROKEN PENCILS AND LETTERS'! The track has meaning. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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