dean

First Take

dean
First Take

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24 Jun 2021

BLAME— Lost in my ways asking for forgiveness God didnt answer now im acting as a dead witness Walking blind and deaf going with events considered reguler business I trusted you more than i trusted myself Hurt heart, consider me the hitman Each beat flowing thru me like your words hit me Black man murdered shot seven times as the system wishes Never stood a chance seven bullets left niggas grimaced Fighting this long lasted war against malicious officers racist to begin with. This world still has a chance at one of a kind blitheness love without second thought sweet as citrus. We have to be the great change this world begins with if not we’ll all burn in a world that has lost all forgiveness Had one too many drinks, now im drunk up to tha T Remeniscing over old thoughts, now i really cant see Shot my brother but you the hero in life i was supposed to see Praying to god everyday, every morning hitting my knees, no way this was supposed to be. Now way this was supposed to be, everything ok n you lied to me You lied to me You lied to me This cant be. The word loyalty floats in the air for grabs Any nigga that gets his hands welcome cus he in class Fake love, shattered hearts broken like shettered glass Please god as a VIP guest if i go to hell give me a pass. If she Begin to act out like Nicki, pass a real nigga his flask Empty bottles, empty heart, empty oxygen mask Remove my face mask, wine straight from the wine cask You asking questions that weren't supposed To really be asked Speaking through protocol that demand us to really wear mask Throw off the mask, permission to ask, license n registration, you should ask, step out, no point, put on my death mask I can’t see the faces of my demons thru these gas mask. God I pray please clear our path our time is moving too fast. Nasty Bitch she eatin me up on that nasty shit Magic dick introduce your gang To this magic clip. 3 to tha chest med kit Pop star ass nigga making that bread flip

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Yo @rdk_23! Waddup - let's take a look at 'First Take'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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