Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @dlomoney! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Make it home safe (10:49)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

dlomoney

3 years ago

#share to friends # blow this up