alone

35 Plays

21 Jun 2021

I'm walking in the rain by myself dont know what to do right or left I'm really sick tired of the world against me man I really feel empty and I'm sick tired of no positivity they say that I'm childy man I'm only 14 why am I going through this man I me and my sis image make a list to do before I die and I'm not gonna lie I'm not gonna cry you wanna meet with me bye bye man ima sigh sigh sigh sigh ima go towards the light.

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3 years ago

Hi @lilrollie.1871! Welcome to our feedback of 'alone'! Your vocals are a good volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

I'm walking in the rain by myself dont know what to do right or left I'm really sick tired of the world against me man I really feel empty and I'm sick tired of no positivity they say that I'm childy man I'm only 14 why am I going through this man I me and my sis image make a list to do before I die and I'm not gonna lie I'm not gonna cry you wanna meet with me bye bye man ima sigh sigh sigh sigh ima go towards the light.

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