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THANKS FAME. I JUST STARTED A FEW MONTHS AGO BUT I'M WORKING 💪
Hey @derrickmiller! Thanks for sharing 'ON MY MIND ' with us! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Good choice of beat! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. With a few adjustments, this track could go down well! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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