life is hard
Ja'Ron MylesLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @jaronmyles! Waddup - let's take a look at 'life is hard'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You’re not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Real chill, we love this vibe! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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