Zane Lyon
Zane Lyon

idiots

idiots

5 Plays

18 Jun 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hi @zanelyon! Welcome to our feedback of 'idiots'! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is solid, everything is clear. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Practise improvising a little to improve your sound! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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