Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @ronnysebaka! Waddup - let's take a look at 'man'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Real chill, we love this vibe! Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ronny Sebaka

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.