Jay Coolshots

3 years ago

thanks so much for the wise advice

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jaycoolshots! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Short tale '! The track has meaning. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team