Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @creativeimagination! Welcome to our feedback of 'I Can't Sleep,If I Can't Make GOD Proud Then '! The track has meaning. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is dope and really works for this track. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Creative Imagination

3 years ago

Yeah,Yeah, Yeah I just gotta make a couple hundred racks I don't even wanna get taxed Everyday I gotta get stronger But I gotta do it away from the gats Away from the rats Cause boy,I ain't no government cat Gotta make racks,Gotta make racks Gotta live life away from the pain Cause purple syrup do not put it away I gotta make sure that I live life in a good way I ain't gotta raise a brother's head just to get more knowledge I got GOD by my side,Knocking on my heart everyday man Yeah,Yeah,Yeah,Yeah,Yeah I gotta know that life's hard man I gotta stay strong,I gotta keep strong Everyday it's nothing but me vs violence But I know that life's not sweet,but sour as a lemon I really don't want sleep,if I can't make GOD proud then You really silly,and you are iffy,You are like luffy,you are so stretchy And I think I should have never met you I know that life's not sweet,but sour as a lemon. I really don't want sleep,if I can't make GOD proud then