Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @227hp227hp! Thanks for sharing 'bat ball' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. The beat is fire, nice choice. Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about themselves. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

227HP

3 years ago

shoptalk stop playing what kind of bat ball in history been here like a dad Tony talks about when he never going to be at bok Dan talk to you like this and talk to me for Saturday that bought yeah I got the transport r leaving the girl in the house you're a bad already got the dog I know that that stuff don't have something I got the speaker but I'm never going to go to the vitamins I got to call me cuz I'm going to tell her she going to send me some of that, I could call and it going so fast as I can and I got pulled over something I don't know what I'm saying I'm a little man I'm only 2 years old and I'm rapping like I'm in the van. loading 18 year old boy your dad so mean I'm not hating your dad looks like ding is Jarell