Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @youngsta_c! Thanks for sharing 'Dat girl is my world I ' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Youngsta_C

3 years ago

(Dat girl my world yeah Dats my girl u know it’s my world when we have swing we twirl girl u know I got does curls I’m your world Ik we met on Facebook when I first saw u u had my world and u got does curls goin crazy and u know me I’m your baby U be on on me like I’m the Man U know imma be frying you to get u a tan then I blow up and everyone is like Collin your the man me and u gonna take a trip to la when we are 21 next we gonna go to a hotel and I’ll show u dat I am the man we catch some shooters and they all ran away from us and den we gonna catch a bus to rolling loud stage U know it’s just a so turn the page peace