Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @rwalozfcbk! Thanks for sharing 'Damage (15:06)' with us! The track has meaning. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Peyton Irving

3 years ago

diss track 2