Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @choppedup! Welcome to our feedback of 'Coming down'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat and are really clear, that's amazing! The bars and delivery are awesome, so many tight flows. We think this track is dope and could be real popular! Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

choppedup

3 years ago

Coming Down Chorus: I feel like I’m coming down Come in and look around What do you see A failure or a prodigy Knocking at your door There’s nothing else I can be Breaking down hard Too far Playing around with The old guitars Verse 1: Raised cage free That’s how I wished to be Freedom I wish I could see Touch it and savor it without losing it I need some freedom to enjoy But she wants to be treated like a toy No ones watching us dance We have a chance