Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jackmoneymoney! Welcome to our feedback of 'SMILE (09:14)'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team