Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @darrengilliatt! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Fall'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Darren Gilliatt

3 years ago

its hard but thats not what im feelin til I collaps is the words ive made the beat its hard but im tryin to get another fuckin beat in . yea yea tryin not to get another fuckin beat in yea yea I was getting in the shower hoping I woud fall but you already no life is not that all so fuck this shit coz im about to ball