Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @obamabick! Welcome to our feedback of 'p-corn boy 👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦👦'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Good choice of beat! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ur mom

3 years ago

ayye pulling up with the chicks no this ain't gonna be a check aye 59 dollars is not enough for my marriage yea momma this is a riot you is a rat aye ik that ur mom is on cancer with her life support in a bag